After reviewing my rhetorical analysis essay and score, I need to work on finishing on time, explaining, expanding on my commentary, finding better explanations, and having better word choice.. I tend to repeat this shows because that's what I learned back in middle school. Therefore, it's a bad habit I have to shake. I also need to make more time to do my conclusion paragraph. If i would have finished, then I would have gotten that 7. I'm not upset, just a little hurt that I didn't do better because I knew I should have. There is always next time, and I did good for my first time.
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